trampled earth

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saw
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trampled earth

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drizzle taps out a morning love song
watery morse code to those able to breathe,
indecipherable to corporations
that claim to be people

to entities that only speak Dividend,
I despise that language, it has these
raspy overtones that grate my nerves
like ancient rock hard romano

it irks me.....Shut Up !
open your freakin eyes !
hug a tree you fool
before it's too late

Sorry about my tone, but
sometimes friends have to tell it like it is
I say this to you because I love this planet
I say this to you because....I love..... you
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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dadio
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Post by dadio »

So well said.

corporations
that claim to be people

to entities that only speak Dividend,
I despise that language, it has these
raspy overtones that grate my nerves
like ancient rock hard romano

it irks me.....Shut Up !
Done well!! 8)
Steve Plonk
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Hell, yeah! Earth Day is every day! Thanks saw! You buzz cut through the BS on this one. 8)
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mnaz
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it's a very prolific, ambitious and logical language that always sounded a bit off to me.

could never quite put my finger on it exactly ... maybe just its general soullessness.

but that's kind of a weak answer ...
theirishsea
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Post by theirishsea »

I agree with this poem-----business has destroyed our values----it is time to reassess everything and change this society.
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.
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