oops october ku

Post by **the mingo** » October 12th, 2013, 9:39 am

ear caves
open to gather
and echo

Post by **judih** » October 12th, 2013, 10:40 pm

raw throat
not from screaming
but from silence

Post by **the mingo** » October 13th, 2013, 7:56 am

Hah! That one got me smilin' this morning, judih - got my coffee smilin' too

Post by **judih** » October 13th, 2013, 1:26 pm

the mingo wrote:Hah! That one got me smilin' this morning, judih - got my coffee smilin' too

great!
finally i get to hand you a smile after getting so many smiles from your words

Post by **judih** » October 13th, 2013, 10:45 pm

pickpockets and thieves
steal my dreamtime
vanish with the loot

Post by **the mingo** » October 13th, 2013, 11:07 pm

you've handed me many smiles, delights, & emotive moments too -

Post by **the mingo** » October 14th, 2013, 8:33 pm

names on stone
a bridge to carry the path
across the river

Post by **judih** » October 14th, 2013, 10:20 pm

sneak away
slithering tail
a coward's exit

edit: this was not in response to yours, the mingo....
but it makes for an interesting sequence

Post by **the mingo** » October 15th, 2013, 1:34 am

yes

Post by **the mingo** » October 15th, 2013, 1:40 am

the train pulls away
from the station platform
rain has blackened everything

Post by **judih** » October 15th, 2013, 11:00 pm

wave of shivers
dream infiltration
surrender to dawn

Post by **the mingo** » October 16th, 2013, 12:50 am

past midnight
quiet moment
everything is let go

Post by **judih** » October 16th, 2013, 10:45 pm

smiling young faces
melt in frenzy of hate
one lone objector

Post by **judih** » October 18th, 2013, 9:51 am

small terrors
yet I climb from bed
blatant bravery

Post by **the mingo** » October 18th, 2013, 9:58 am

crows flock & pass overhead
i began to count them
then changed my mind

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