may ku

Clarity.
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day plucked clean out of autumn
thrown smack into the middle of May
polar deja vu
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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an inch closer
to smells and noises
as neighbours awake
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collapse of yang
lost in a sea of mushrooms
feeble cry for help
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come one - come all
cries for help
answered here!
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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sickness bids farewell
bye bye control freak
back to business
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why women want
a mystery
what she takes from him
I feel :( sad when I add to her burden
with my sarcasm

a man and a woman
husband and wife
some can some can't
beats me 8)
If you can't give me love and peace, Then give me bitter fame. — Akhmatova.

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narcissus blossoms
raising their heads above new grass
couldn't keep their mouths shut
i picked them for a lover
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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humour caress
it's all a relief
after a laugh
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birds calling
south wind in new leaves
flow unidentified & undeniable
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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monster
slowly nibbles at my stuff
computer virus
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how many hours?
can you count to seven?
yes and keep counting
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going forward into the future
where we will get our toes
sutured to our foreheads
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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childhood confusion
between a penis and a toe
older and wiser now
If you can't give me love and peace, Then give me bitter fame. — Akhmatova.

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along with virus
an idea, a concept
and room for more
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computer virus
earthquake rocks the land
coffee therapy
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