Ruiners

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izeveryboyin
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Post by izeveryboyin »

A million glances
A million little
deaths
each touch
such
exquisite
torment
perfect in
it's
Nihilism
destroying
broken
hearts
But I'm a broken
woman
You're
a broken
man
Together
we damage the world
even if it's just our own.
sometimes I just like to breathe.

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whoaisme
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"Together
we damage the world
even if it's just our own."

:mrgreen: :idea: :!:

congrats on a great poem, i loved it!
"From the sudden invasion of a mind not my own in the world. This I will record. For whom? For m y s e l f, beyond denial and beyond indifference." - Philip Lamantia
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Post by WIREMAN »

love the form and flow here
csn&y was sayin the same thing in 1970
lets get miserable together my love.....right! :lol:
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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Post by SadLuckDame »

HaHa! It's good!
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll
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Post by judih »

Well, look who's back to offer us a fine spine-tingler!

hi! Hello! Kaylaa!
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:lol:... bravo & bienvenida otra vez!!!!!!!! :D
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Post by creativesoul »

damage control
yeah
i get it

nice one
kind of like a razor blade pencil
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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revolutionR
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Post by revolutionR »

this poem reminds me of current events in my life
she wanted to record my poetry, but all i have is
recorded threats and insults on my cell phony
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mnaz
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seems it ain't ever quite what it seems, but it's what we got until, ?
not sure.
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revolutionR
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Post by revolutionR »

sugar daddy i ain't
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i could use a sugar daddy right about now :mrgreen:
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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Gaaa!!! :|
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