Intertwined

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Tjflowers80
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Intertwined

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I take my heart
And seize the day
I watch from afar
As he walks away.
Return now to me;
Hold me close to you;
Open my eyes so I may see
Just how much you want me too.
My senses are heightened
As we move in the night
And no longer am I frightened
For in my dreams there is a light.
So tonight my sweet;
Come home and stay;
Let us be intertwined and free
Where beside you I shall lay.
And above me the stars align
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.

Jessica Taylor
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Re: Intertwined

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My greatest passion is what I am able to create. As always Wes I can count on you. Thanks!
And above me the stars align
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.

Jessica Taylor
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Re: Intertwined

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I always feel like renting and watching a 50's romantic movie when I read your stuff. "An Affair to Remember" or something alike.

Warm. Dreamy. Debora Kerr-like-esque.

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Re: Intertwined

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Is that a good thing or a bad thing 68degrees? Lol. Thank you for your thoughts.
Jess
And above me the stars align
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.

Jessica Taylor
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Re: Intertwined

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Love poetry. Longing and passion. I remember writing love poetry. Love is a good thing! Keep writing it! It makes the reader want to fall in love. Thank you for that! Being in love is one of the most special, intimate, human connections.

Maybe one day I'll write love poetry again. ;)
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Oh, it's a good thing, TJFlowers80.

From "An Affair to Remember" to "All That Heaven Allows" all the way up to "Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind"

It's a very good thing.

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Happy Birthday, TJFlowers! :)
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Thank you!
And above me the stars align
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.

Jessica Taylor
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