Blank wall.

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Doreen Peri
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Blank wall.

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I missed my phone call.
My letter hasn't arrived.
I'm staring at a blank wall.
Wondering why I'm alive.
I have no purpose.
I've lost a lot of drive.
I missed my phone call.
My letter hasn't arrived.
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Bodhidharma stared at a blank wall for 7 years in China & found enlightment....like the way u repeated the letter and phone lines....just hoping you are all right?.....r u :?:
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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I'm ok. I just missed my phone call and my letter hasn't arrived. Some days staring at a blank wall is necessary to make sense of it all. I have a purpose, unlike I stated in the poem. My purpose is to stare at a blank wall until I reach enlightenment and to make sure I don't miss the next phone call. There's nothing I can do about slow mail delivery. hah! ;)
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"If you are not too long, I will wait here for you the rest of my life"

Oscar Wilde
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Zen like. Had me thinking. Well done. 8)
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