if it were so...

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creativesoul
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if it were so...

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the waves broke on my back
opened up the seacaves
where the shark was sleeping

the bran muffin without butter
healthfood inbtween my teeth
seaweed in my hair

i reach again for your vacant stares

i listen to the trains in the distance
watch the wind on the river

the liquid moved it back into place
there in that blue
i saw your face
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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revolutionR
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We are in an underwater world, the sleeping shark
is dreaming us. 8)
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Yes at tunnels in Kauai - at any rate- the day is perfect for this
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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so it is...
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beautifully expressed....liquid sky....salty healing and meditation.....be well and keep writing
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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