banzai

[saw]

I so wish I had that skill
to say so much more with so much less
but as you can see, I cannot
isn't that a wonderful art though.....
like banzai trees and miniature golf

[revolutionR]

I agree with you but then I never was into miniature golf

[WIREMAN]

aaahhhhh minature golf....it was always fun with a date...then it was with the wife n daughter, great fun at the beach....keep all writing options open, leaving spacefor the mind to wander is a beautiful thing....

[Steve Plonk]

I love miniature golf, which was invented here in Chattanooga, TN, or so they say.
Great poem. I also like the little banzai trees folks grow who are into them. Wish I'd a green
thumb like that...

[saw]

my first apt. in Key West was right next to miniature golf course run by a retired Navy man

He would let us bring our own albums over, put them on his turntable, and pipe them through the air as we played golf.....good times

[Cenacle]

I so wish I had that skill
to say so much more with so much less
but as you can see, I cannot
isn't that a wonderful art though.....
like banzai trees and miniature golf

nice last line!