Far Off

the mingo: Posts: 9725; Joined: June 26th, 2005, 3:51 am; Location: Tug Hill Plateau

Post by the mingo » February 17th, 2015, 6:34 pm

boats in harbor, coast in mist
far off, one hopes very far, the place
where everything disappears

Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by saw » February 17th, 2015, 6:50 pm

I really like this new venture in brevity mingo....the poem is open to so much....

the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism

the mingo: Posts: 9725; Joined: June 26th, 2005, 3:51 am; Location: Tug Hill Plateau

Post by the mingo » February 17th, 2015, 10:16 pm

Thx, saw, I'm discovering making less do more has more than one level to it in regards one's own perception of things. Thx again

Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by WIREMAN » February 17th, 2015, 10:34 pm

all hail mongolia!

me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Post by judih » February 17th, 2015, 11:46 pm

that distant place
we'll never reach
but, so what!

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Post by the mingo » February 18th, 2015, 9:59 am

Thanks wireman & judih !

Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.