Trouble is ...

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the mingo
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Trouble is ...

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trouble is
everybody has too much
education

too much numb scuttle search skull
snubnose stunt tongue

work the world to a worm

dull flood of mind nuns
the brides of hell jello
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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well-observed, mr mingo
hell-jello, indeed
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I only have educreation... i create it myself. college dropout, moi ... hadda go to work... needed that green cash ... dumbest thing i ever did, quit instead of getting a loan to finish (well, not the dumbest. I've done dumber). speaking of a loan, i've been alone a lot. Never been alone in the unemployment line, though.

I like the jello line but I can't think of jello without thinking of cosby and that seriously makes me nauseous.

..... loved the alliteration in this piece, mingo :)
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Thx doreen - cosby & jello - i had forgotten about that - 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Curlers? what curlers? 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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