Waiting for Love

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Waiting for Love

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Only the curious
or the damaged
wait for butterflies
among the brambles
in a field of bricks
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Re: Waiting for Love

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magic happens
between the crumbles
and the jagged
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Re: Waiting for Love

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Same for poets, I guess. The waiting, I mean. Thanks for the comment, Judith.

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I think I am both...curious AND damaged....nice economy
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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Re: Waiting for Love

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Ton: Other comments have me thinking it should be "and" ;) even though I still like either /or...what to do?

Saw / Judith: Thanks. As always.

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