traversing my mind

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wylde
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traversing my mind

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you lace your dress
a cross, akimbo
traversing my mind
drawing me inwards
as you hold; dancing glances askance
with the i of your consciousness
reflecting me in what i wade

out into sea

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Been missing your writs bro.
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i used to live with a dancer, man she could really do the akimbo.... 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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Wayne R Baker wrote:Been missing your writs bro.

wayne - thanks bro. sincerely appreciate the compliment.
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WIREMAN wrote:i used to live with a dancer, man she could really do the akimbo.... 8)
you lucky fish on a bicycle! akimbo is one hell of a dancing contortion.

thanks wire man.
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succinct and lush
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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Liked this back on GP. Glad to read it again.
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saw wrote:succinct and lush
saw - thanks for the read; seeing & feeling of it. appreciate all 3 of those aspects.
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fuchsiafestival! wrote:Liked this back on GP. Glad to read it again.
sistersun -thank you; and thanks for being re-nourished...


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I got some leftover chicken-broccoli ...
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justwalt wrote:I got some leftover chicken-broccoli ...
kosher

Thanks Walt! the w3rd is gaudy tinsel, so that would be the perfect accompaniment...


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