Dawns Song
Re: Dawn Awakens
like the imagery and space within the words....
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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Tjflowers80
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Re: Dawn Awakens
I love the last two lines. Very beautiful imagery. Very beautiful poem. Thanks!
And above me the stars align
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.
Jessica Taylor
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.
Jessica Taylor
Re: Dawn Awakens
there is a lot of talking going on in the woods, even the flowers and weeds have voices...that's why I feel so alive after a hike....like I tapped into the universal heartbeat
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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Tjflowers80
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Re: Dawns Song
Saw I know how you feel? I may a woman but I am no primpy one at that! Your comment is true in every way.
And above me the stars align
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.
Jessica Taylor
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.
Jessica Taylor
Re: Dawns Song
Received and felt in a good way.
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fuchsiafestival!
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Re: Dawns Song
Some of the images in this are pretty good. I like the idea of stars being restless. Punchy piece.