ladders reaching far above the clouds, in giant's hands

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Kailashana
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ladders reaching far above the clouds, in giant's hands

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lemon blossoms
lemon yellow
lemon tree
its art dangling
remembered
jonquils and
tulips, buttercups
and roses,
its curve of space
breaking light

breaking into seas,
into fear, into the
first rung on Jacob's Ladder,
reaching far above the clouds
into giant's hands
and
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standing on their shoulders !
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jack's beanstalk
his golden eggs
why didn't he just use the ladder
Anna Ruiz ?
maybe it was too cloudy that day ?
and who is Jacob
Jack's little brother ?
curvy space is awesome... 8)
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Kailashana
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How, some information is just too much, eh?
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How, some information is just too much, eh?


p.s. I *saw* that.
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Colourful poem & theme. 8)
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like that! nice :!:
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nice !......i was just fooling around with my original comment, but honestly love the flow of this....
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... but love,
honestly,
the flow
8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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