last poem of the night

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saw
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last poem of the night

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generally I seem to know
even before I begin, this
will be the last poem of the night

so the pressure is on,
don't want to crank out a dud
you never know this may be the last poem ever

so I try to gather my self, weave
my thoughts into a brilliant afghan
to show the world the importance of color

I do see the hollow yarn
in all its duality, I watch my arthritic fingers
wrinkle before my eyes

this blanket has taken a lifetime
every nuance is woven into a tale
and in the end the moral is creative and warm

I leave you now
pull the textiles up to my nose
inhale the years like pure cocaine

I get a rush as the decades swirl
a windswept dervish wrapped in an autobiographical shawl,
once again, I am high
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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pull the textiles up to my nose
inhale the years like pure cocaine

I get a rush as the decades swirl
bravo!
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thank you judih, appreciate it....
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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* 8) *
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ahhhhhhhh that poetic high.....a rush like no other 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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A poem for me walked up in a late afternoon as the baby slept
it was this poem of yours , yes I said fellow well met ,I agree with Judith..I am thinking life gathers love.it keeps.
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no duds were cranked out here.
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lovely write- quite intimate 8)
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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