Susie Q

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saw
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Susie Q

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her eyes were calico
like her personality
speckles of fairy dust on the lips
of a far away smile

she was outside the molds
shattered all the calculations
like a mirror
flung back at the sky

we basked in our brevity
it was never about quantity
only the moments of rapture
fleeting as a hawk in a tree

that bird is going to fly
it's going to prey like it is told
we never spoke of the future
we knew, this was it.
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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the mingo
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* 8) *
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Future prey...like NOW! 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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sweet...! :D
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sweet, indeed
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