pretzel logic

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saw
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pretzel logic

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steely dan was playin' it cool.....
gettin' down on that pretzel logic,
and I was california dreamin'
'bout a conglomeration,
fact and fiction, equal
partners, swing that woman
'round and 'round, do-si-dodo,
grainy super 8's hissin' and poppin'

my own quirky indie movie
no stoppin', only hoppin'

I thought about seals and crofts
that summer breeze that makes me feel fine,
euphoric winds....oh man, those historical tunes
for old timers like me, sweet songs
like butter and jam
to slather on midnight toast,
soundtracks for long runs through the jungle....
nurtured down and dirty

in the cradle of civilization....
in the cradle of rock
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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Takes me back. Fine capture. 8)
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thanx dadio...appreciate the feedback
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throw back the little ones and pan fry the big ones...remember Maria muldaur I saw her with those summer breeze guys in '71 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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good times Mark...my daughter whose a singer does 2 Maria Muldaur songs....Waitress at a Doughnut Shop and Midnight at the Oasis....sweet '71....I was in the Keys soakin' up the laid back vibe...and a little sunshine
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far too many memories my mind can take before I shuck them all in trust that there will be more with each succeeding year in the life of...


astute piece, SAW, as usual. cheers!
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