Maybe you made coffee,
maybe you left a note.
I can only imagine the warmth
of your hand as you closed the door.
There was no need for words,
best things are left unsaid.
When You Left this Morning
Re: When You Left this Morning
superb....a joy to my eyes.....and brain... 
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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leafsailors ghost
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Re: When You Left this Morning
Interesting how a flood of memories came with this tide of a few simple words . The warmth of her hand . yes. so what is this show not tell bullshit they always harp on? I laughed when I tHOUGHT ABOUT THAT NONSENCE QUESTION ASKED ABOUT A POEM.
DID MY HEART HEAR THE WORDS?
ANSWER YES
DID MY HEART HEAR THE WORDS?
ANSWER YES
Re: When You Left this Morning
missed this yesterday - but what would have today have been without it ? Thx, 68
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
Re: When You Left this Morning
saw wrote:superb....a joy to my eyes.....and brain...
Been married over 30 years. She's still my bride.
Re: When You Left this Morning
Depends on what's showing and telling sometimesleafsailors ghost wrote:Interesting how a flood of memories came with this tide of a few simple words . The warmth of her hand . yes. so what is this show not tell bullshit they always harp on? I laughed when I tHOUGHT ABOUT THAT NONSENCE QUESTION ASKED ABOUT A POEM.
DID MY HEART HEAR THE WORDS?
ANSWER YES
But you're right...most of it is BS. Just write. Glad it's talking to ya'
68degrees
Re: When You Left this Morning
Say hi to everyone at AT for me. Tell 'em I miss 'emthe mingo wrote:missed this yesterday - but what would have today have been without it ? Thx, 68
68degrees