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a gentle nudge
come on mind
flow, goddamn it
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dean martin said it
ain't that a kick in the head
thanks, now I remember
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a huge gathering
clowns and stages
they hand you the mic
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happy
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birthday you say
well I'll be damned
j-u-d-i-h
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one wall
one bird's shadow
there
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for one day
older
then free to regress
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dance on a crater
moon pies for the guests
another day has gone
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teeter on heels
stiletto madness
acrobat wardrobe
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turn it up
turn it all the way up
let it blow
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turn around
there behind you
surprise yesterday
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you can't have yesterday
today insists upon it
tomorrow is a concept
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under umbrellas
two men passing
one raises his arm
in greeting
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tales of shine and bliss
fiction or reality
pick your preference
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The haiku is a Japanese verse in three lines. Line one has 5 syllables, line 2 has 7 syllables and line three has 5 syllables. Haiku is a mood poem and it doesn't use any metaphors or similes.

amusing to say
in the haiku realm of things
a change in context

haiku is haiku
enjoying itself as art
the presence of mood

metaphor and verse
a simile with no home
being in context
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