Another New Proverb

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68degrees
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Another New Proverb

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Her crescent sleeping
face in early morn

holier than any sun
rise
saw
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Re: Another New Proverb

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it's difficult to use brevity in an ode....but, you did it...well done
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
68degrees
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Re: Another New Proverb

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saw wrote: October 26th, 2017, 9:39 am it's difficult to use brevity in an ode....but, you did it...well done
Thanks...appreciate the words.
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