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saw
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variations of orange like this
can only be seen in the fire
but never stop trying to mix
the perfect shade of tangerine

the mind is a hungry child
determined to cry and scream
if its needs aren't met in the push and pull
of sentient vibrations

ah yes my friends, existential tug-o-war
try to focus on the knot in the line
dreams dashed and reborn,
each and every day is a jack-in-the-box

a goofy tune
with an occasional spring up the ass
oh c'mon. surely my language doesn't offend you
I suppose I could pretend if you like

so sorry my stoicism has gone flat
my apologies it isn't up to par,
by the way.............what is par
on this course ?


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the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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stilltrucking
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muchas gracias 8)




five days a week
eight hours a day
I set in shower booth with blue curtains
and listen to the children cry
Outside of a pediatrician's office I don't know where you can find more crying children than at a Walleyworld™

I listen to them and think to myself , you are damn right kid, you got a raw deal
go moan for mankind.

jack in the box
hippies look good in the box

nothing to do with your poem
I just got fixated on those hungry children :oops:
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the mingo
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* 8) *
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Arcadia
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mostly a question... :lol: :lol: :lol:

always enjoying your poems, saw! gracias!!!!
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WIREMAN
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Some course par is all u need 😎
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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thanx ladies and germs
always great to hear from you
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