Weather Walker

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the mingo
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what does "the next time" mean?
more than paper or delirious coo?
do ya think we are dealing with superstition here?
or is it really "please, we've been lucky so far?"
I take out a line
replace it with another
everything is touched with dust & graveyard thought
but, getting down to it, we both know
we would be further
if not for the rain
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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I'd rather be golfing in Nepal amongst the white clouds.....:)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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* 8) *
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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It means like a passing thought
A moment of timeless means derived
By sensative words of true power
Sliding near by like a snake is age
Not time
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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everything is touched with dust
reminder of present moment
so much bigger than we thought
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" next time"...is about hope and faith... :shock:
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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Sliding near by like a snake is age
Not time
* 8) *
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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" next time"...is about hope and faith
temporary times, temporary places - Appreciate the read, saw
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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