Santa Monica/ viceroy

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creativesoul
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Santa Monica/ viceroy

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My son got me a room at the viceroy
Santa Monica early morning mist
Best bed my hips have ever slept on
Going to take a beautiful people shower
Fluffy white towels and a robe
My sister is asleep- she does not know how
Grazing on room service food and terrible coffee
She sleeps; she has teenagers
Had to get away from them and sleep

I told her I promised I would be quiet

She is “tara tara tara “from Juan of Spain
I’m “ Jana Jana Jana what are you doing jana”
Italy-
Trust me
You should have seen us 30 years ago
But how fortunate we are
To have survived the crack smoking
Pretending we were rocket scientists
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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poetry is like rocket science for me
I hardly dare to comment on it.
I post a quick reply to express my gratitude that you survived.
thank you for the poem 8)
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Snow White : Cinderella- - Joan of Arc -Jane Fonda- Liza Minnelli- Joni Mitchell- Bette midler- lady ga ga
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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Singing in the rain in Los Angeles - being forced to go shopping - send $
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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flooding in LA
what does it mean
another gem
from the archives

the mines of a life
that wasn't boring.... 8)
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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I love talking about the things done in secret
My sister tara and I can do dish
Not too hard to imagine
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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