waiting on a sunny day

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sonofthesun
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waiting on a sunny day

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my life
been fucking around
it is a cliche
but i have come to know
it is not
make believe pretend
it is not karma
it is things
make other things
happen.
not hard to understand
it is just that
sorry...
i will love you forever.
There is no empty space
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saw
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Joined: May 23rd, 2008, 7:32 am
Location: B'more, Maryland

Re: waiting on a sunny day

Post by saw »

profound sadness
expressed
with just the right amount of economy
and poignancy
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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