night ignited

[wylde]

.

i parked my camel
and smoked an old poem.

the night ignited
but it rained only
ash
and my butt ached
for a dry sigh

.

[saw]

...nice imagery especially first two lines ( which could be an entire poem )

[mtmynd]

Bingo!

(note: i'm sharing your "Until the lion learns how to write, every story will glorify the hunter" - African Proverb)

Excellent!

[wylde]

...nice imagery especially first two lines ( which could be an entire poem )

thankyou saw.
comment valued.

[wylde]

Bingo!

(note: i'm sharing your "Until the lion learns how to write, every story will glorify the hunter" - African Proverb)

Excellent!

thankyou.

and
It's ours to share.☆