The sun will rise

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creativesoul
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The sun will rise

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On the table ; are envelopes and stamps
Looney tunes with bugs bunny on them
Coffee creeping up slowly this morning
Still dark.. the heat hides in the shadows
Smells like dust and sprinkled grass
All that sleep
is still engaged to my muscles
The sun will rise

Walking in the heat
Dog brings the toy
The squeaker is long gone

The dream stood quietly in the corner

Unattended ; wild
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
saw
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Re: The sun will rise

Post by saw »

pre-dawn wonder
the limbo before light
yes yes, the sun will rise
whether we can see it or not

thanx....descriptive imagery
and palpable metaphor
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
mtmynd
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Re: The sun will rise

Post by mtmynd »

nicely expressed, c'soul... good read for a pre-dawn morn.
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