On the Cusp of Enlightenment

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mnaz
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On the Cusp of Enlightenment

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On the cusp I drive dinosaur
engines sucking dinosaur fuel,
sucked out of earth, the past.

Energy equations add up to zero.
No one explains the ramifications
of Buddha riding in a pickup truck.

Buddha knows enlightenment.
Buddha should air down his tires
on a steep trail, or sand or clay.
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Re: On the Cusp of Enlightenment

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bodhisattva
a pause before nirvana
to change our flat tire
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Re: On the Cusp of Enlightenment

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burning the midnight oil of time we see
the spirituality of the Exxon Valdez
nonexistent
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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Re: On the Cusp of Enlightenment

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Nine lines just right writes
your assembly perfectly stated
as if you were reborn in a truck

Perhaps you did... perhaps you did
enlightenment strikes whenever...
whenever need calls for the Truth

That definite silent explosion
always unexpected as it should
without a knock or call - your own!
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Allow not destiny to intrude upon Now
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Re: On the Cusp of Enlightenment

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I'm a hopeless truck guy, no excuse.. Thanks judih, steve & cec ...
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