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before each step, discovery
after each step, gratitude
before I see, epiphany
having seen, humility

I wait, weightless
I sing, voiceless
I’m free to slip away.
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beautifully expressed with an economy of words....a skill I don't possess

maybe a new term emerges....." waitless"..... 8)
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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saw wrote: February 19th, 2022, 2:37 pm beautifully expressed with an economy of words....a skill I don't possess

maybe a new term emerges....." waitless"..... 8)
yes, waitless indeed. One day, I hope!
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Sweet- I like it a whole bunch
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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thank you, Jana.
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