Lovely

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creativesoul
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Lovely

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Sorry I said for just losing my mind
I tried to pick it up
But it shattered in my hands
Thank you I think
But it’s not clear why
The light touched that inner core

The pictures appear on my eyelids
Your childhood
Your sadness

I feel like I opened the curtains
Let some light in there


My friend mysteriously appears
In a ghost like mania
In a dreamtime
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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mnaz
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Let some light in.
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no mind, fewer illusions, molecules of surprise
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I love it
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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