moonshine eyes

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saw
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moonshine eyes

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drunk from her moonshine eyes
I longed for her company, and slowly
we each found time and excuses
to wind up at the same place
at the same time

I was looking down the hill
across the street
from the art museum
into the dell at Wyman Park,
the rock music was ascending
as this stunning blue-eyed woman
came from behind me and actually
whispered in my ear, " You goin' down ?"

and that moment holds a place
no one else can ever hold, the most
thrilling introduction ever.....
1988.......and by '92 we walked
in opposite directions, we were
both unsettled in our own strange ways

I wrote a song about her when we were
together, and it lived in my guitar case
for many years
yellow and brown coffee-stained
and I sang it a couple of times
after the fact, but then one day
I balled it up
and gave it a pensive toss
into a nearby can............
it was time to move on
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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Re: moonshine eyes

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first saw her in the corridors of my workplace
escorted by suits and ties
couldn't take my eyes off her
long auburn hair
confident stride
(and a rear end to die for)
but in the company of power
obviously above my station
just a glorious comet
flashing by overhead...
until...
I was assigned to be her tech writer
and the chemistry was immediate
but man...
18 years between us
if she hadn't taken the initiative
I wouldn't have dared
I mean
what could this goddess
this huntress of the boardroom
see in an aging low-level tech?
so I wrote for her
and not just Operational Qualification reports
but poetry
and so we spiraled together
into each other's arms
and beds......
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"If one could deduce the nature of the Creator from a study of creation, it would appear that He has an inordinate fondness for beetles." -- evolutionary biologist J B S Haldane, (1892-1964)
saw
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Re: moonshine eyes

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terrific response Roy...... :D
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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