Yes, 2023?

Clarity.
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that recurring figure
occupying space in my mind
still a mystery
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mealtime songfest
each child’s solo
stronger than the last
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repair paint rotten wood
four years since extension ladder
younger son bracing

he doesn't have the skills
for the work but he is mountainous
and has mighty hands
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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mountain boy
mighty like Everest
my safety net
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buried in my skull
deep DNA images
ready when I am
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kibbutz night music
whooshes, soft roars and cat songs
one-time show?
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pulse accelerates
mind makes new connections
as Fall shows her face
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you ok, judih? tell me you & yours are ok. Please
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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juudih: wrote
that recurring figure
occupying space in my mind
still a mystery
a silent space in my brain
in the sacred core that burns within
she is there for me always
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she still sings same songs
for kiss given years ago,
listen carefully
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she still sees
she reads
a careful reader is my benefactor

a derivative ku?
beats me
I got to try
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Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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normalcy we cry
we pray to live humble lives
bring her home to us
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- when your armies,
all your babies,
go off to war -
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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under the Xmas tree
an electric train that could
only travel in circles
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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