In the Beginning

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mnaz
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In the Beginning

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In the beginning it was
echoes of rock and air,
most importantly the air,
so people writing Bibles
could at least breathe.

In the beginning was the
big bang like a pipe burst,
the most fearsome event
in the universe, yet it didn't
stop us from surviving.
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Re: In the Beginning

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I love this. The first stanza made me laugh! 😂

The second one is humorous too.
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Ha. I intended for this to be longer, but I kinda ran outta gas and told myself "well, I'll come back and finish it later," and then I forgot about it. Thanks Doreen.
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Maybe the last time I wrote anything when I felt any sort of twinge of optimism/silly humor. Then the great darkness came a few days later. Well, I think at this point, I'll just try to turn my back on it as much as possible. Life goes on.
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