the waves

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e_dog
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the waves

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she asked why my eyes were wet
and my mouth was always frowning

'cause i haven't reached shore yet
but at least i'm no longer drowning
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mnaz
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music.
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sure is a good musical verse ....e-dog.....wired
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Post by mtmynd »

yo! e-dog... i haven't heard the music, but the rhythm sure is there.

cool!
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e_dog
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Post by e_dog »

-- thus spake the fisherman

before the hurricane
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