gypsy frenzy

Post by **alienpoet** » August 26th, 2005, 12:29 am

every sweet rose colored wall
is licked by the gypsy's thirsty tongue

her song is offered
loud ,strong and flavored with...
life...
living...
40 years in savory marinated juices

blood red vocal chords
open mouth parched
and blistered
hot

wild refrains near insane

a sudden cold wind in a frenzy
blows

and the gypsy is gone

and the song is over...

for now

Post by **WIREMAN** » August 26th, 2005, 2:06 pm

hello AP......ya struck a chord with this wired man, love this one mi amigo........

Post by **Doreen Peri** » August 26th, 2005, 4:55 pm

Nice!

Loved "licked by the gypsy's thirsty tongue"

and "40 years in savory marinated juices"

and

"blood red vocal chords
open mouth parched
and blistered
hot "

Aw hell, AP - I'm quoting the whole darn thing! ha!

Well done, my friend. Good to see you here!

(what happened to your avatar? It's not showing. )

Post by **alienpoet** » August 27th, 2005, 5:20 am

thanks mucho wired.
thanks Doreen. Don't know ...did i have one?

Post by **Arcadia** » August 27th, 2005, 9:36 am

sanguíneas rojas cuerdas vocales

I like this line

Post by **alienpoet** » August 27th, 2005, 7:52 pm

thank u muchas galore . i think i mispelled marinated...

Post by **iblieve** » August 28th, 2005, 1:53 pm

You have a reason to mispelled words dear, you write in the DARC, lol. Awesome visionary writing with emotional substance. Never do I get enough of your writing. "C"

Post by **mtmynd** » August 28th, 2005, 2:19 pm

great images painted with words dipped in emotions drawn from the well of your creativity.

well done!

Post by **alienpoet** » August 29th, 2005, 3:31 am

mucho thanks to I.b and mtmynd-apreciate the comments friends.

Post by **Bohemian** » September 5th, 2005, 11:46 pm

By chance did you pull your words of choice, from the box of magnetic words? The piece was visionary, and lucid, very cool.

Bohemian

Post by **alienpoet** » September 28th, 2005, 4:48 am

thanks Bohemian. no i didn't but love yur comment.