The heavy

Website · Post by **mpc** » December 13th, 2005, 8:05 pm

Pushing with their noses,
solar fish nudge craters open.

This song marks the beginnings of a bridge
rising over the roadway. Pink hail
freezing in a rainpipe.

Words sharing one bed, a spangle of bracelets
broken. (the muscles in her arms roll;

her paste jewelry comes down in pieces)

Post by **Doreen Peri** » December 13th, 2005, 9:53 pm

You, sir, have a way with slinging a phrase. Good writing here. Love the images. Welcome to the Studio! Little birdie told me I might know you from another board but I don't think so.... or do I? Hmmmm.....

Post more! Love it!

Post by **joel** » December 14th, 2005, 12:30 pm

doreen peri wrote:
Post more! Love it!

Dude, yes. Amen!

The images you string together are charged with amazing colors and movement! I'm just reading and rereading and loving it!

Website · Post by **mpc** » December 14th, 2005, 2:04 pm

doreen peri wrote:You, sir, have a way with slinging a phrase. Good writing here. Love the images. Welcome to the Studio!

Thanks, Doreen.

Little birdie told me I might know you from another board but I don't think so.... or do I? Hmmmm.....

Think about squirrels.

Website · Post by **mpc** » December 14th, 2005, 2:06 pm

joel wrote: Dude, yes. Amen!

The images you string together are charged with amazing colors and movement! I'm just reading and rereading and loving it!

Thanks, joel. I've been reading some of your stuff, and think it's great. When I have time I'll have to go back to your poems and post some of my thoughts.