a small ku...but then aren't they all

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a small ku...but then aren't they all

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Ocean Mammal Ku

a silly seal
is secure in the notion
whale I never
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Avian Ku

Who preys on silly men-
Flat faced bitches
Watching my words
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'Blessed is he who was not born, Or he, who having been born, has died. But as for us who live, woe unto us, Because we see the afflictions of Zion, And what has befallen Jerusalem." Pseudepigrapha
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Moon ku

flat-faced bitch
like a moon
shows her all
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Flame Out Ku

Birds of a feather
Phoenix and Owl
Burned but wiser


Obscure Ku

The knight stands and waits
The princess shows her ass
The dragon laughs


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http://www.fcps.k12.va.us/westspringfie ... mbolsa.htm


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Donut ku

Life is like a donut
there's much more to it
than just an empty hole
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this life on the screen
one dimensional donut
a Moebius Ring
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bacterial divorces as river forks
wet both same and separate
amoebic clouds create from antiquity
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small ku
grow bigger
twenty nine sylables
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bacterial divorces as river forks
wet both same and separate
amoebic clouds create from antiquity

man woman together alone
river forks Meiosis
blood is thicker than water

not much better 21 syls.

seems too long

I liked your three line thingy what ever it was.
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Bible Kus

too many syllables
a mote in the ku
who cares, not hai

there's a beam in my hai
there's a mote in my ku
la dee dah dee du
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Barbie Ku

a plastic doll
eyes all glazed
no ken do

Barby Ku

finger licking good
stick to your ribs
saucey ku
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