Nature Haiku

Clarity.
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Nature Haiku

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True Haiku: Japanese poetry origin of three lines of five, seven, five, sylables respectively. Please don't hate me I'm just a fool who loves his craft!

Thunder shakes the house
lightning silhouettes abound
hard rain soaks the ground.

Sorry, the devil made me do it! I swear!

Be well,

lenny
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Clouds roll in the night
it is a hard rain gonna fall
things have changed
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lonesome lay lady
heavy clouds refuse to burst
one more for the road
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lonesome lay-man too
heavy clouds, re-fuse to form
no more for the load.

Smilin' at you, judih...as opposed to flirtin'! Wink. (re-fuse used as in garbage here) This is just six a.m., just woke up, still drinking first cup, haven't meditated yet even, 3 1/2 year back time travel. Pay it no mind. I only posted this because seeing the word 'judih' always makes me smile somehow.

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2:30 p.m
fresh from trauma studies
CPR rescue

lenny - great to see you
a chronicle of a walk through time
& whitewater daydreams
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Tried
Been on your feet
All in a day's work
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five shafts of sunshine
part the clouds: across the hills
the rain and rainbow
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orange in the palms
late afternoon birds everywhere
new leaves and wind

naranja en las palmeras
pájaros del final de la tarde por todos lados
nuevas hojas y viento
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morning black
crow sounds alarm
moon hits the trail
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hojas amarillas
a mediados de noviembre
cielo azul de hoy

yellow leaves
in the middle of november
today's blue sky
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