Poetry manuscript

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Doreen Peri
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Poetry manuscript

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I edited my poetry manuscript.
I deleted all of the worthless lines.
If you'd like to read it, here it is.
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stilltrucking
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My epoch novel.
Totenkopf

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I find it rather ____________; and the sections following ____________ are especially ________________. The lines _____________, which seem to indicate a sensation of _________________ perhaps allude to _____________ and the related __________________ of ___________. All in all, the poem is ____________________.
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mnaz
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You need a new editor..
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