Sonnet:

[Totenkopf]

TO her Treasures.

O faire fresh maiden, my most tasty tart--
Not I alone have been given to know
the ecstasy of thine womanly parts
that from each our marvelous motions flow.
The valley scarlet encircled with fold
awaits the arrival of rigid Knight;
and close behind, thine lesser, lovely hole
suffused with lovingness for soldier's might.
Do not inquire which we findeth best,
Knave, or querulous hag: of royal Love
thou reckon no more than your latest jest,
taking plebe Eros for Zeus above.
When these tenderest pleasures do subside
then shall we our villainy dark confide.

[hester_prynne]

Smashing Poem Toty! (That is until you added that note about sphinxter.)

The last line made me delirious!
(But that sphinxter thing....edit it outtt!)
Ick!!!!

H

[eugeneherman]

Mein freund, Yet another war satire glibbly put. Sehr gut!

[Totenkopf]

Donkey shane, Herr Eu!

Miss Hes. I took out the S--ter. Es toot mir leid. Sry. I'm no authentic poetical. Eu-mann is corrrect: bad satire. Think Depp and Lord Rochester.

[eugeneherman]

Mann ist mann, (Bertoldt Brecht}, however Hes replied with a fine response. While your satire is obtuse (leetle bit obscured), I still like yer style. & BTW you ARE authentic cuz you edited , OR considered, that is you re-realized what you say or said. Das ist sehr gut!
Donkey Shine back atcha!

[hester_prynne]

Indeed Toty dear, treasures is really a much better way to say it....


H

[Doreen Peri]

FUCK.

good poem.

heh

[eugeneherman]

well, well, such eloquence dreen!

[Doreen Peri]

The topic of the sonnet deserves such praise!
By Totenkopf I often am amazed!

[Totenkopf]

Thx. I jus' knew that "Shakespeare for Anarchists" class would cum in handy one day. To be honest, we have been reading a bit of Pound (not to say we approve of all his perspectives) and he advises would-be scribes (whether literature, drama, poesy, etc.) to write parodies for practice...........

[Perdida]

Wow. Love it.