R.I.P. "Action Poetry"
http://www.asheresque.com/BoardArchive/ ... html#86357
still there
ya can't keep a good scroll down, man
not even th FBI
i just wrote my senators and congressman
aksed fer cheney's impeachyment
for hi crimes
agin th constitution
said he ought get th death penalty
mercy
nobody knockin at my door
not yet
still there
ya can't keep a good scroll down, man
not even th FBI
i just wrote my senators and congressman
aksed fer cheney's impeachyment
for hi crimes
agin th constitution
said he ought get th death penalty
mercy
nobody knockin at my door
not yet
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]
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Thanx for the link, jimbo...
I remember that "dust" piece. That may have been my first attempted po-em.
Anywayz.... It used to be so great to watch those threads unfold and scroll out... yeah... the energy of it...
With so many boards, the webmasters "bit off more than they could chew", or so it seems. Understandable. In July '04 I knew the site would never come back the way it was. I knew they would ax most of the live boards, but I didn't think they'd ax ALL of them... at the very least "Action Poetry" should be a true, live interactive board, right? They need to relax the heavy-handed approach on that board, IMO. I mean, they could always have another more tightly-controlled board for more "composed" creative writing. Nothing wrong with that. But "Action Poetry" that can take over 24 hours just to appear on the screen??.... Hmmm.... Not buying it.
I remember that "dust" piece. That may have been my first attempted po-em.
Anywayz.... It used to be so great to watch those threads unfold and scroll out... yeah... the energy of it...
With so many boards, the webmasters "bit off more than they could chew", or so it seems. Understandable. In July '04 I knew the site would never come back the way it was. I knew they would ax most of the live boards, but I didn't think they'd ax ALL of them... at the very least "Action Poetry" should be a true, live interactive board, right? They need to relax the heavy-handed approach on that board, IMO. I mean, they could always have another more tightly-controlled board for more "composed" creative writing. Nothing wrong with that. But "Action Poetry" that can take over 24 hours just to appear on the screen??.... Hmmm.... Not buying it.
no action reaction
with an
impaction
no shit
dust ....(2.21.03)
http://www.litkicks.com/msgArchive.php?message=556283
by mnaz on December 06, 2003 13:52:00
with an
impaction
no shit
dust ....(2.21.03)
http://www.litkicks.com/msgArchive.php?message=556283
by mnaz on December 06, 2003 13:52:00
I leave the highway for awhile
the desert is bursting with light
over that rise, gearing down for a portal
a dub song emanating from the dash
turned down low yet echoing thru the canyon
a shot of whiskey and an escape in progress
I was told there's no sign of god 20 miles into dust
but I prefer to see for myself
vegas was a flash burned into my eyelids
but those bleak slopes beneath its powerlines...
glowing, ambitious, seductive curves bending space
undulating roundscapes washing over bare mountains
prodigious curls upward even into other climates
odd lumps poking out of preposterous ramps
my telling real illusions
so I crest over that rise...
the earth suddenly drops away in a divine perfect arc
the far slope is an ethereal vision, a sculpture
its muted shapes feathered into a dream...
reaching the far side is reaching the dream
I want the dream, so I follow the great arc
I plod thru a hundred washes for hours
I make that far slope, but I'm still not there
now I notice that the dream is behind me
I must have missed it as I went by
maybe it was the whiskey...
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[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]
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thank you... i never saw this link before
http://www.asheresque.com/BoardArchive/
i'll be going on there and gathering some of my own words.... very cool to have access again.. i didn't know that existed.
http://www.asheresque.com/BoardArchive/
i'll be going on there and gathering some of my own words.... very cool to have access again.. i didn't know that existed.
cool.... yeah, i'm pretty sure it was my 1st poem attempt, originally posted in a shorter version on 2/21/03 on the old A.P. board. I remember the excitement when someone replied within 20 or 30 minutes or so... "luke t/ drifter" (from Australia, I think), if I remember right... that was just after i first joined LK. I still remember who replied to my first post, a couple weeks before that... Kreddible Trout and Foolish Paeter (Marksman 45)... ah yes.. Nice find...
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Professional or Poetic
R.I.P. A.P.
R.I.P. Haiku Board
R.I.P. the site formerly known as litkicks.
I have read more poetry in the past six years than I have in the previous sixty.
The place was what it was because of who Levi was.
We were moths drawn to his flame.
Such a galaxy of stars he attracted
Looking for Jota's tribute to him and I found this
Professional or Poetic
R.I.P. A.P.
R.I.P. Haiku Board
R.I.P. the site formerly known as litkicks.
I have read more poetry in the past six years than I have in the previous sixty.
The place was what it was because of who Levi was.
We were moths drawn to his flame.
Such a galaxy of stars he attracted
Looking for Jota's tribute to him and I found this
Hello PosterToasters. Call me Jota. I used to live at litkicks but I've run away. Stay tuned for loony postertoaster rants from a West Coast soul brother.
http://postertoaster.blogspot.com/
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