Dream haiku

Post by **Axanderdeath** » December 21st, 2004, 12:03 pm

TAKING A DUMP
OFF THE PARKINGLOT
3 STORIES UP.

Post by **STUPID BOB** » December 21st, 2004, 12:30 pm

slow molasses bog
escapist legs go slowly
death is right behind

Post by **judih** » December 21st, 2004, 12:36 pm

slow molasses bog
escapist legs go slowly
death is right behind

that's the dream
a gaping chasm
wandering the night

Post by **Axanderdeath** » December 21st, 2004, 12:41 pm

more words
meaning
nothing but feeling

Post by **STUPID BOB** » December 21st, 2004, 1:13 pm

judih wrote:slow molasses bog
escapist legs go slowly
death is right behind

that's the dream
a gaping chasm
wandering the night

thugs life threatening
finger upon the trigger
unable to squeeze

Post by **stilltrucking** » December 21st, 2004, 2:31 pm

Post by **STUPID BOB** » December 21st, 2004, 2:42 pm

stilltrucking wrote:
the quiver of the finger
reptile brain urges
warm mammalian blood

hot flashes sparking
naked dogs curse by barking
sensual aromas here