you came to visit

Post by **judih** » March 29th, 2008, 12:34 am

i was lying on a Friday futon
under the sweet fan of ceiling swirl
and i remembered how you came to visit
on such days as these
how you'd smile your way into my fantasies
jokes and innuendo paving the way
that way of yours
that link of ours
the sweet dissolve of distance
till distance did dissolve us
those years grew wings
as today you came to visit
and how sweet the coming was

march 28/08

Post by **westcoast** » March 29th, 2008, 12:41 am

oooooh, so sweet

loved it

~westcoast

Post by **WIREMAN** » March 29th, 2008, 2:20 am

always a treat j....

Post by **judih** » March 29th, 2008, 3:51 am

glad for the sharing

thanks, janet and mark

Post by **sooZen** » March 31st, 2008, 11:23 am

the sweet dissolve of distance
till distance did dissolve us

ahh yes...dissolving is solved. hah.

Post by **judih** » March 31st, 2008, 11:31 am

resolving solution
how long ago it was
- newsolving (evolving)

Post by **Doreen Peri** » March 31st, 2008, 11:33 am

how did i miss this?

nice, judih!

very nice!

till distance did dissolve us
those years grew wings

i love that!

Post by **Lightning Rod** » March 31st, 2008, 1:25 pm

this is a smooth as warm lotion, judih

Post by **constantine** » March 31st, 2008, 1:27 pm

nice interplay between and within the lines. very polished.

Post by **judih** » March 31st, 2008, 10:23 pm

thnx for the sweet responses
dor, dissolve is my middle name
l-rod, i'd say the lotion's on me, but i don't do double entendres at this time of morning
constantine - polished! it does sound as if it took work.
it didn't - i was just describing a vision - no work at all on my part!
thanks, anyway

Post by **Lightning Rod** » March 31st, 2008, 10:47 pm

judhi
look at it this way double entendres are good any time of the day considering time-zone

but this statement, 'no work at all on my part' is so close to my heart
I always try to put my greatest effort into making things look effortless
(I hate to let anyone see me work)

Post by **Doreen Peri** » April 1st, 2008, 8:33 am

Lightning Rod wrote: this statement, 'no work at all on my part' is so close to my heart
I always try to put my greatest effort into making things look effortless
(I hate to let anyone see me work)

You know the best way to achieve this, right? Sure you do.