...and i'll go mine

[constantine]

...and I'll go mine


so many things you cannot do
limitations, conventions
old and new
each as confining as the last
rhyme - archaic,
alliteration and assonance - cliche
more imagery, no abstraction
structure, intent, content -
ashlar, concrete, cement...
great taste, less filling.
what are you trying to prove?
what cheap sentiment;
you're running the risk of appearing passe -
the horror,
as if the present is so engaging -
as if the future won't someday be the past,
your considerations are being considered
considerably, but

[westcoast]

i like it..
don't often see you rhyming
good show

~westie

[constantine]

thanks western one. those photo treatments knock me out!