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I've gotta mind to leave it all behind
Now's the time

I've gotta mind to leave it all behind
Now's the time
Now's the Time

I've had enough of your kind of love
Thank God I'm strong enough to give it up

I'll leave the pain that rules my days
Growing's a process of throwing things away

And with the wisdom of my tears I'll vanquish my fears
Unknown roads I'll pound

And when I've lost the road
I'll be found
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Depressed, S/Bob..?

"Love Stinks" is the song that came to mind while reading this...
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mtmynd wrote:Depressed, S/Bob..?

"Love Stinks" is the song that came to mind while reading this...
HELL NO :D Wow. My apologies. This is a song of discovery and the realization of expectations. It is an anthem for life.

Thanks for the thought. Thanks a lot. :D
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Post by rumtumtugger »

SB:

Even though the door's opening, not closing, that "it" in your first line is all important.

Leaving it all behind can mean, as Dylan says,

"Bringing It All Back Home."

A fine poem, a fine shout, a great hum, at the level of nothing becoming everything.

(If that doesn't sound too much like Dr. Wayne W. Dyer, which I'm afraid it does)

Very good stuff.

Merry Christmas,

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rumtumtugger wrote:SB:

Even though the door's opening, not closing, that "it" in your first line is all important.

Leaving it all behind can mean, as Dylan says,

"Bringing It All Back Home."

A fine poem, a fine shout, a great hum, at the level of nothing becoming everything.

(If that doesn't sound too much like Dr. Wayne W. Dyer, which I'm afraid it does)

Very good stuff.

Merry Christmas,

rtt
Thank you and a Merry Christmas to you!
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is there a melody to this?


sounds like a walking song
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judih wrote:is there a melody to this?


sounds like a walking song
Is now. Just in time for inclusion on the new B4U CD.
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great - would love to listen

(have to install quicktime, though, cause couldn't hear the last tune)


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judih wrote:great - would love to listen

(have to install quicktime, though, cause couldn't hear the last tune)


judih
Which last tune? QTime an easy DL & install, btw.
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Post by judih »

Hear Stupid bob play guitar

http://studioeight.tv/phpbb/viewtopic.php?t=1545

couldn't hear stupid b or the guitar
but will rectify
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"with the wisdom of my tears, I'll vanquish my fears..."

shout it from da rooftops baby!
ungawa!
nice one Bob,
H 8)
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Judih said:

couldn't hear stupid b or the guitar
but will rectify


Judih, ya ain't a missin' much. Thanks!

Hester said:

"with the wisdom of my tears, I'll vanquish my fears..."

shout it from da rooftops baby!
ungawa!
nice one Bob,
H Cool


Thanks, Hester. I didn't know you liked proto-tunes. {going up on roof}

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