Poetic Tango

Post by **goldenmyst** » June 16th, 2008, 10:03 pm

The river of words courses
Through my June mind
Following a fluid path
Into golden meadows of verse
Each meandering thought
Twinkling like a star
Lost in the cosmic fugue
Our lyrical dance
Unfolding in improvisational dreams
Our visions linked in fiesta frolic
Each voice echoing
A note in our song

Post by **saw** » June 17th, 2008, 6:37 am

seems like a place I'd like to visit, john....how do I get there?
beautiful sentiment with real conservation...quite a skill.......

Post by **Arcadia** » June 17th, 2008, 1:48 pm

fluid writing-tango!!!!

Post by **hester_prynne** » June 17th, 2008, 7:08 pm

On a canoe, floatin down the river of your mind.....that's what readin this is like...
A beaut, no doubt friend...
H

Post by **westcoast** » June 17th, 2008, 10:10 pm

lovely john!

~westie

Post by **goldenmyst** » June 18th, 2008, 9:40 am

Saw, I don't often get there either. Thanks!

Arcadia, glad you liked the fluidity!

Hester, I love to canoe down streams. Mind canoeing is great too.

Westcoast, a lovely comment from a lovely friend.

John

Post by **constantine** » June 18th, 2008, 10:06 am

again, nicely done - your spirit comes through with each poem you write.