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mtmynd
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Post by mtmynd »

you say the words
are on the tip
of your tongue

i'll suck them off
for the passion
speaks louder than
the words ever will

one moan at a time
building into a
crescendo of ecstasy
that would leave
anais nin speechless

her pen spent of ink
with a drypoint
sketching vapors
of heat left behind

((wordless))
westcoast
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Post by westcoast »

a
crescendo of ecstasy
that would leave
anais nin speechless
great lines -- deep passions

enjoyed!

~westie
mtmynd
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Post by mtmynd »

Thanks, westie, for the reply. Thought I'd better answer you before this brilliant poem ended up on the next page, never to be seen again. Whoa! That would be a cruel trick on originality and creativity!

signed,

Mr Humble
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Post by westcoast »

lol!
mtmynd
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Post by mtmynd »

westie-j ... it's not so much your 'lol' but that calm glow on your face in the aftermath of those lol's that get to me...

TY :)
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