(unnecesary) war-ning

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Arcadia
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(unnecesary) war-ning

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You can laugh
at my beers, Baileys & caipirinhas.
You can laugh
at my Garcia´s & Marley´s songs.
It´s ok.
You can also add to the list
uruguayan humor & monotonous voice
and maybe make me laugh.
That´s also ok.
But never ask me to consume you on fridays.

Te podés reír
de mis cervezas, mis Baileys and mis caipirinhas.
Te podés reír
de mis canciones de García y de Marley.
Podés agregar a la lista
humor uruguayo con voz monótona
y quizás hacerme reír.
Eso también está bien.
Pero no me pidas que te consuma un viernes.

(inspired in an old friend´s mail: a recurrent theme with each time more acid-creative variations :lol: )
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Post by constantine »

uruquayan humor is vastly underated.
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Post by westcoast »

lol!
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Post by Perdida »

love that ending line :D
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Post by saw »

I agree with all the above......nice work
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Post by hester_prynne »

Hah! I do diggity this!
Nice one Arcadia!
H 8)
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