B & W

Post by **mtmynd** » July 8th, 2008, 7:47 pm

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B&W

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Post by **Doreen Peri** » July 8th, 2008, 7:49 pm

Who says just because you see it in black and white doesn't make it true?

True dat, mt!

Color me satisfied!

It all makes sense now!

Post by **stilltrucking** » July 8th, 2008, 8:01 pm

<center>drove me crazy</center>
trying to figure out
<center>how you did that centering.</center>

Post by **mtmynd** » July 8th, 2008, 8:07 pm

a very well-balanced composition that speaks volumes on the duality of life - the eternal struggle between the yin and the yang which is the supreme balancing act that requires the subtle forces of imagination to bring forth into an overtly simple dialogue, yes?

Post by **Doreen Peri** » July 8th, 2008, 8:10 pm

Sure. Why not?

Post by **mtmynd** » July 8th, 2008, 8:11 pm

i knew you'd understand, Dor'. thanks!

Post by **Doreen Peri** » July 8th, 2008, 8:17 pm

You're very welcome.

....

hey cecil.. just messin' with ya... If you read all that into it and that's what you intended, that's great! A poem can mean anything you want it to.

Your description is sure 'nuff a true analysis of how it works.

Post by **mtmynd** » July 8th, 2008, 8:20 pm

I call it (them) "Creative Writings"... wouldn't you?

Post by **Doreen Peri** » July 8th, 2008, 8:21 pm

Well, since you created them, yeah, OK.

Post by **WIREMAN** » July 8th, 2008, 8:24 pm

now ya got me stuttering ccccecccill......

Post by **mtmynd** » July 8th, 2008, 8:31 pm

hah! wired, my man... slow down when you read this... pace yourself, pause between the dots... and again before the next line, inhale... sense the rhythm, clip, clip, clip... it's there, you can hear it, your can feel it... it's all so, so... right now. boogo-shhoooba-deliccccato.

Post by **WIREMAN** » July 8th, 2008, 8:38 pm

yeah crazy cloud....suave..........

Post by **mtmynd** » July 8th, 2008, 8:45 pm

ahh... crazy cloud... great expression... and a great book, indeed.

take care, wired, and thanks for stopping in.

Post by **emel.scott** » July 8th, 2008, 9:25 pm

I like the subtle gradations of this poem

Post by **Lightning Rod** » July 8th, 2008, 9:33 pm

emel.scott wrote:I like the subtle gradations of this poem

now you've got me rollin'
you are one of the best critics I've ever read