Domme (revised)

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emel.scott
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Domme (revised)

Post by emel.scott »

Men, milk fed and conditioned
in dark confines, pale and frail

then pounded like veal, tenderized
to the palate of a strong woman.

Her will balances instinct, laughs at
earth’s perfect nature. She is definitively

female but is compelled toward the
beautifully grotesque and the grandiose.
We should not mind if on our ear there fell. Some less of cunning, more of oracle...Thoreau
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Post by saw »

now, "beautifully grotesque"....could very well be a metaphor of
America...though I doubt that is where you were going with this.....
be careful, Scott, those encounters can get quite costly.....but then
again, aren't all addictions......an interesting peek into the world of Black....( lace and leather, that is)
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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Post by Arcadia »

palatal
dosificated
(or not)
Fellini´s dea
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