Poetry is like a chimpanzee

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Nazz
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Poetry is like a chimpanzee

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poetry screeches when it oughta be silent.
it scratches my cranium incessantly, flit flit.
it wakes me in a dream, impostor of a dream.
the scene takes too much work, the visual,
and that's not even the half life of it.
once you dig in, oh those metaphors.
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flit flit is the bomb!
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** flit **
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Post by judih »

those metaphors pile up
like a lucid dream told by terence mckenna
in soft sweet highspeak
appealing to inner flashbacks
been there done that, but wasn't it swell
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